THIS is what Nine Muses' "DOLLS" could've been...

[jeit91.livejournal.com]

barostaryt

*barostar is Star Empire's in-house choreographer.
granted they wouldve had to dumb down parts to accommodate live vocals, but they could've pulled it off(nay-sayers can be directed to Figaro). im in a teary-eyed rage(not really though) because they picked the current choreo over this!

Comments

[jjoeyjjang.livejournal.com]

The choreo is nice, but i feel like what we have now suits the song more.

[pivotandsway.livejournal.com]

I actually really like the current choreo now. I don't get the fuss over this one. It's cute in parts but it doesn't seem to flow very well or show off their ~charms~

[flumes.livejournal.com]

ya ia 4 1nce!

[pivotandsway.livejournal.com]

nvm i change my opinion...............

[jeit91.livejournal.com]

true true. i guess it would be more nice to combine both into 1 product

[pivotandsway.livejournal.com]

yeah. I wish they had like gradually modified the choreo like they did during News (I think?) I mean excluding the amazing Sungah/Kyungri dance break. I really liked the rap part in the creative choreo but I also like when Euaerin bends over I'm conflicted. Hopefully their next comeback shows off their dancing more. And has more than 2 new songs excluding intros.

[pikapika217.livejournal.com]

IKR - i consider this mini more like a digital single deluxe. Like they had the song ready and were like 'shit - we need an intro song!' and then had to add an intro for the main song and then said 'fuck it - instrumentals for the 2 real songs' and called it a mini

[pikapika217.livejournal.com]

ITA

aside from Sam just walking at the end of her verse to her position the official choreography is on point - graceful, delicate, dynamic without looking or being complicated. This one isn't the business.

[flumes.livejournal.com]

i got what you mean but i think that this fits it...less for the song tbh

[jeit91.livejournal.com]

yeah, probably why they didnt choose it in the end.

[illustratedd.livejournal.com]

omg this choreo is amazing. this guy should choreo my wedding or smth i'd come in like HAY ERR1 I'M THE BRIDE

but seriously, i like both choreos but this >>>>

[pivotandsway.livejournal.com]

it's not really shade it's just a fact that if you're bouncing up and down on the floor you might get out of breath and not sing super well

[spacecadet0.livejournal.com]

This, I mean even Michael Jackson would use backing tracks during difficult choreography.

[jeit91.livejournal.com]

i am the last person to be throwing shade at 9m's vocal ability. just doing all that choreo looks tiring if you're trying to sing.

[cocodile.livejournal.com]

crying with you, OP (ㅠ_ㅠ)

This choreo is fantastic, and I'm disappointed that it wasn't the final product. Any and all Sweetune songs deserve the best moves in my humble oh pin yun,

[xalexandriam.livejournal.com]

parts of this are qt, but i love the current choreography more.

[floptbh.livejournal.com]

looks a little messy and some of the moves are a bit hard hitting for a song like dolls

[iznanassi.livejournal.com]

Nah, I actually think the current choreo suits the concept they were trying to go for way more than this. This is too much movement for "super feminine delicate dolls", and it's not graceful at all. This choreo is good though, maybe they can recycle some parts.

[stephantasm.livejournal.com]

lord... this is so much better than the official version

~___~

[jeit91.livejournal.com]

oh hello

[age-ofconsent.livejournal.com]

i really like it but it doesn't fit the song much.

[pikapika217.livejournal.com]

I like the actual choreography more as it is prettier and more delicate like a doll. the only part I dislike is that Sam just walks to position after her vocal. She should've traveled to position as she was singing or had her position closer to where she ends. hrm.

But the official choreography is more fun & dynamic and seemingly less complicated even with all the formation changing. Yes there is a little bit too much walking a bit but it's still more suitable to what makes this song so lovely.

ETA: something about the official choreography is also more inviting (I think it's all the arm gesturing) that makes me really charmed & glad to see it.

[epona.livejournal.com]

yeah what we ended up with suited the song way more.

[minimallow14.livejournal.com]

Love this choreo, but I also really like the one they have now. Plus, its definitely more practical than this one.

[spread.livejournal.com]

It's perfect.
But the current choreo is perfect as well.

[imyoona.livejournal.com]

Way too much going on, their current one suits them way better. I'm really not a fan of this choreo.

[dotdotdotting.livejournal.com]

So glad they didn't go wit this because I didn't like this one at all. They wouldn't have enough energy to sing the whole song and I think the whole choreo in general is really messy compared to the current one.

[engraved-16.livejournal.com]

Hmm idk i really like their current choreo in comparison to this :) i feel like their current one flows a bit better, not to say that this one is bad but their current one is a bit more polished? i guess.

[10135.livejournal.com]

Some of the moves are good, but some of them are such a hassle. Like that hip move, then crouching into another hip move. That would have been a mess, lol.

[rennehollic.livejournal.com]

I actually like both but i think the one we have now fits the song much better